Sunday, August 14, 2011

How should I write this in my essay?

Okay so the subject I have chosen to write about is Disney. I have to decide if it sends bad messages to girls and or not. I don't think it does. I have already turned in the essay and we are allowed to do corrections. The research paper I received to help me stated that "Disney girls wear revealing clothes." I need to state that Jasmine, Ariel, and Kida all wear clothes that fit their culture. I already have Ariel...What is Kida's culture exactly? Also are there any ideas on how I could write this differently? I can't change what the paragraph is about though...?

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